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Nishga wrote: Thank you hun Apr 23 06 12:50 am Link Aww, thanks! I get a lot of compliments on the shot you chose - I don't see what the draw is to it, either... I think it's the legs... Anyway, for you, I would say... This one: https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=438c7f3e2d45e I think that your expression is a little odd - not as cute and spunky as your others! Mandie Apr 23 06 12:55 am Link Justine, You're very pretty! I liked your portfolio, but to choose on this thread, I would say : https://img4.modelmayhem.com/060418/23/ … f5ad_m.jpg because it doesn't show your good looks as the rest of your port does. Specifically your face. Mandie, Your portfolio was so colorful and almost all of your photos caught my eye, so I will choose the ones that didn't catch my eye immediately: the "waiting" and the blue bikini one. Both not really relating to your modeling, i guess just the shot as a whole. am ready for criticism- esp since i've only done basically one shoot recently...need more tfp deals with willing photographers.*) Apr 23 06 01:12 am Link samantha fox- at first i was going to pick "my knee is my best asset" but when i looked at the image fullsize i liked it- it's a good contrast to your other, more heavily done-up images. just looks a little awkward somehow as a thumbnail. so i picked this one: https://img2.modelmayhem.com/050805/21/ … bc098d.jpg you have another image like it where you're looking into the camera and it's a much stronger shot. in this one you're looking at your hands but nothing is going on there except for the tie, which is not too interesting. when you look at the camera it's as though the viewer has tied you up and you're waiting for their next move. in the hands one it's like you're bored. i love the style of your portfolio though, nice work! Apr 23 06 01:23 am Link lusid wrote: thanks a bunch! -I was expecting the headshot one- because its boring to me...but its my only headshot. lol. and the pic you chose, i only like because it deceptively looks like i have a nice waist...lol. I think both could have used more expression on my part. thanks again! Apr 23 06 01:27 am Link ok... so, I want to play ! Give it to me. I know none of them are great, I have some awsome shots I am waiting to get from the photog. But for now go at it. Apr 23 06 01:32 am Link THE FIRST ONE IN THE 3RD ROW CAUSE IT COVERS YOURE PREETY FACE!!!!  Apr 23 06 01:37 am Link Great pics. I chose this one https://modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_id=444b1fc9158b8 Becuz I see it as a sanpshot of a back with harsh lighting. Apr 23 06 01:47 am Link eva luv wrote: Aww I love you ! That was tooo sweet, give me the truth haha Apr 23 06 01:47 am Link michelleKristine wrote: ok know i totally like luv u Apr 23 06 01:56 am Link Apr 23 06 02:06 am Link Michael Blackmon wrote: 4rth row 3rd pic im not really shure what going on in that pic its kinda of just there but everyhting else is great!!!! youre pics are beautifull:) Apr 23 06 02:08 am Link oh do me. do me!! tell me what's bad!! i need to know! I like constructive citisism!! Apr 23 06 02:10 am Link youre 3rd pic it doesnt show off youre connection with the camera!! you have greta stuff in youre port and that ones just there no real conection with it!! but other than that youre beautifull keep up the great work!! know will someone please do me know i want to play!!! give me some structure please!!!!!! Apr 23 06 02:22 am Link eva luv wrote: Thank's!!! Apr 23 06 02:34 am Link hey, i was skipped... Apr 23 06 02:34 am Link https://www.modelmayhem.com/member.php?id=100771 I really don't want to sound mean... but...I can see the attempt at some great shots but they didn't quite get it... nice try though! Apr 23 06 02:40 am Link lusid wrote: okay i got you, hold on Apr 23 06 02:41 am Link lusid wrote: this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 2d29398b28 Apr 23 06 02:43 am Link dani faye wrote: Do me too !! The picture thing ! Apr 23 06 02:47 am Link lusid wrote: I'm gonna say this one... Apr 23 06 02:51 am Link michelleKristine wrote: this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 7132730c73 Apr 23 06 02:53 am Link dani faye wrote: Are talking about me or the models? Well, appreciate your input. Have a good one. Apr 23 06 03:12 am Link dani- the parking meter shot, because you kind of get lost behind the looming parking meter just on account of the difference in scale. also, the picture in the bottom right- your face and hair look great, but that huge white collar is really distracting. Apr 23 06 03:14 am Link One12 Images wrote: Both...it's mostly the models though...wardrobe and makeup too...some of them just need a different angle... I can totally see what you were trying to do but I don't think it was accomplished. I hate critiquing 'cuz I don't like sounding mean. Apr 23 06 03:16 am Link lusid wrote: Yeah, those are my least favorite too! Apr 23 06 03:17 am Link dani faye wrote: Not suprised... any reason besides that its not a professional shot? Apr 23 06 03:23 am Link michelleKristine wrote: your facial expression Apr 23 06 03:30 am Link dani faye wrote: Hi Dani! This one is dark and doesn't do much for me: Apr 23 06 03:41 am Link Joe --- DOD Images Your execution is wonderful and you have many beautiful images. My choice for "worst" is https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 4a1bc4af9e My reason is that you have many beautiful images of your model in the same outfit/location but this one makes her appear to have a (bone?) deformity in her fore pelvis area which I found very distracting and couldn't move away from. My second choice would have been hair flip but only because part of her body appears to be in too much shadow. I wish she was equally lit in the sunshine her face is glowing within. But that picture's issue really couldn't compete with the ficticious growth on the model. Best of luck to you! Melissa Apr 23 06 04:01 am Link Melissa- If I had to pick one it would be: https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … bf5b3e01c7 I don't think the expression flatters you at all. In a composition such as that one, I suppose I'd expect the model to either be biting her fingertip (near the corner of the mouth perhaps) or... well, sucking on it. I think subtle adjustments like that would convey sexiness without being trashy or radically altering the general composition. Just my cent and a half... Apr 23 06 10:18 am Link Jay Thanks for your valuable critique, I will certainly take it into consideration. I think I like it so much because it's not the typical finger being sucked or bitten; this feels more unique to me... I find it interesting that one commentor thought it was "innocent" while another said "naughty naughty." Your portfolio was very easy as their was really only one choice for me. I love the feel of your work. Therefore, the one I chose was: https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … f530116392 And my reason is because of the slanting wall that your model is sitting upon. It seems unnaturally tilted; perhaps your camera was held at a slight tilt(?)... it's weird. If the wall really is that misshapen by the masons I would have chosen another location OR if I liked the fact the wall was tilted, I'd have widened the perspective to make it more obvious that it was a matter of the wall being incorrectly built rather than "photographer error." Best of luck to you! Melissa Apr 23 06 03:47 pm Link this one as i don t think is the same value that the rest of your portfolio (you have some great pictures...) good luck https://img4.modelmayhem.com/060415/19/ … 7420_m.jpg Apr 23 06 08:31 pm Link Melissa Derr wrote: HA! I do, in fact, tilt my camera to some degree in most all my photos; it's the level images that are a rarity in my imagery, as the few you see online are probably the totality of all the level images I've ever taken. Thank you for the feedback. Apr 23 06 08:42 pm Link i was skipped..... Apr 25 06 12:03 am Link First of all YOU ARE GORGEOUS ! hehehe but i cant really see your face in this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 4d194dd804 Apr 25 06 12:19 am Link Mandy- This was hard! Your so beautiful. Im going to have to say: https://img2.modelmayhem.com/051129/21/ … b56c6e.jpg Love the hair & makeup but as someone else commented there is not enough light on your face. It just does not do you enough justice! Apr 25 06 01:16 am Link Heather, The picture I would choose for removal from your port would have to be: https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … 401c7eb1a8 I love the provocative suggestion but... you feel so far away and your face (in fact your entire head) seems to get lost as though it weren't even there. Had the photographer used a fill light on your facial left it would have been a stronger image. I just can't see you well enough. You're the model and therefore just as important as the bike; this does nothing to promote YOU. Best of luck! Melissa Apr 25 06 02:29 am Link I've got some time this morning so I'll give this a try! Melissa, This is my least favorite in your portfolio; Your hand looks rather manly and the other model seems to overshadow you in this photo.  Apr 25 06 07:53 am Link  It was hard to choose....nice port! I'm an amateur so what do I know.  but to me, this pose seemed uncomfortable and her expression reflected that.Apr 25 06 08:47 am Link |
