June 10, 2010 10:24am i like the concept, good location, but awkward pose, maybe play with photo shop if the model could play around and be a little more creative in poses, and finding a cool angle at moments too, - maybe even if a train was facing the camera - appearing to be approaching and the models body is facing the train yet her head is turned to the camera, justa peek like as thou she is torn between what to do.. MOVE! or stay...