February 15, 2010 3:01pm Awesome shoot with good wardrobe decisions. Although you should be cautious of anyone using aggressive beauty retouching on the skin without reintroducing some texture. That being said the higher viewpoint was a great choice as it created a natural frame for your face with the big hair. The background texture here contrasts well with your skin, however the lines in your arms and from the background rods are not used with any affect. I would have removed the rods in post-processing, especially where they create odd tangents with what looks like chopped off arms to the camera left of the frame.
The low cut and perspective reads sexy-but nothing else about this does. As such the dress could have seen more movement and I would have moved a bit lower and closer to keep the natural frame of your hair. With your arms being used in picture and some eye contact this could have been a more intimate moment for any viewer. (and I hope this was not just projection on my part)
It has been great viewing your portfolio. I hope you continue to post more!
