January 08, 2008 11:01am this is a very edgy shoot, but the only advice I need to offer is- never have a "missing shoulder" in a shot- next time twist a little more towards the camera so that people can see both shoulders for a more "in your face" look.
January 08, 2008 9:38am Not a bad pose. Interesting expression. Unfortunately I don't like the crop it makes it feel awkward. I would rather see more of you not less in this pose. If there is head room on the original shot it ought to returned. also see if your photographer can soften the background in PS or some other edit program, its distracting and amateurish. Wrinkled can work but not in this one, it just looks cheap
