October 22, 2016 10:15pm You effectively directed the details of your model's great pose; facial expression, tilt of her head, thumbs in belt loops, plus that nice bit of pretty midriff.
October 20, 2016 7:07pm It feels like the model belongs in the environment around her, it doesnt feel forced. Nice composition. If I were to change one thing, I might brighten her face slightly, but Im not sure about that. Overall great pic