October 02, 2013 2:39pm I think you have brought the detail out in her eyes really well and they are very captivating, the light is very even all over and it would be nice to see a little more contrast in it, maybe try introducing a reflector if you do not have exterior lighting. Build a rapport with your model, make them feel comfortable as this will show in their expression and expression is everything. A hair light would really add dimension to this image and separate her from the background better. Regards, Darren Woolway ARPS
