November 27, 2012 6:54pm You asked for some critcal comments....
I like the pose and the messed hair... I like the curves of her body against the backdrop. I think the patterned cloth provides a good visual depth cue. I like the "lost perimeter" lines on her leg and mid-drift where it meets the badground. I think that should have been carried on to the bra strap (lose the bra strap). On the negative side I think her left hand (laying flat) needs some more definition. This may be the style but I like to see full dynamic range in all my work (a preference). Our own eyes do that when fully adapted so I do it to my photos. Her lips may be "puckered" a bit... not sure... I would stay away from any pursed lips but this may lend itself to a pin-up style... so what the heck do I know. Hope this helps. A bit bright for my taste I think. JD
