July 10, 2011 2:35pm Great face, lighting and theme. Look to create more shape in the body and model your hands with more angles. Visually your left arm is growing out of your face-try to think about the photographer's view when making shapes in your body first then after each shot make slight adjustments from your head, hands, arms until your feet are also right. Personally, I think models should consider moving less and perfecting their pose: This will allow/force the photographer to explore more camera angles and lighting adjustments. Here the look and the lighting was great, the camera angle and pose is reading flat.
