July 10, 2011 3:09pm Composition is off. See if another shot has the tree further to camera left and your off center. Then make it a black and white. But that white shirt is going to be a problem. Think about making a shoot more interesting add water or dirt if you can not get a good prop. Better to have something in your portfolio that works than to have 40 of these... Get involved with the shoots, the photographers will love you for it and your time will not be wasted!