July 31, 2010 8:51am Personally, I think this shot has some great potential. To me this picture seems a little off because of how reflective your face is to the light compared to the rest of you. It almost looks as if you are sweating a lot. If it is make-up, a powder may help.
You should definitely try this pose again and compare! (Possibly try your hair in a messy bun and without to see how you like it)