June 22, 2008 12:15am Oh! And add a catchlight in the right eye....
Seriously, images like this make the digital specialist in me cry... 2 minutes in my hands, and this image would go from being pretty damn good to being fantastic. *sigh* Spend the two minutes! It's worth it!
June 22, 2008 12:03am I absolutely love this shot - the pose, the expression.
Personally, I would make the crop less square -- try bringing in the right side to about the elbow (not ideal - you'll want to edit the elbow shadows to reduce the impact of cropping at a joint, BUT it will completely change the balance and reduce the massive amount of space taken up by the left shoulder)