October 05, 2009 6:05am I really like the feel of this one .. get a stick and beat the ones who try to hide tho :)the guy In the white shirt seems uncomfortable I would have put him a little farther back ... I like your work .. great job !
October 05, 2009 6:05am The guy on the left doesn have the look of the two guys I can see. What is with the peek a boo guy and the lighting change from front to back. Guy in the front has a strong light from the left guy in the back has weak from the right. Shoot the guy in the front and the guy in the back again, lose the other two, with consistent light and you may have something....you said you wanted a critique.
