December 26, 2009 9:28pm Hair is not good at all... if your gonna do it straight then at least tassle it or make it perfectly parted and straight. Otherwise it looks oily and blah.
this is important as the makeup if you car about your port as well as a simple fix even if you dont know about hair styling.
As for the makeup, you totally lost your highlighting. I cat emphasize the importance of shadow highlight. You want to make the eye D not 2D... NEVER go all the way up tot he eye brow then it looks like a raccoon eyes. :(( so sorry to bust your chops baby on this one but you told me to be harsh if needed. I love this shot though- posing and models are beautiful.
