August 22, 2009 9:15am with your request for critiques from the fourm page here it goes
there are a few failure points with this image.
however its a great shot.
I like the deep of field, I love the anonymity of the photo, with all do respect to the model that anonymity makes the shot very erotic, and has a great sense of motion.
on the down side, The crop is fine but I wish you got her hand in there, as well as a little more light on her face, and the focus seems to be just a little soft.
One last thought if her date was sitting in that chair, especially with the guy in the background looking on, you'd have a million dollar print here.
Just my 2 cents that and , and a buck won't buy you much these days.
