July 10, 2011 2:41pm Here there is a story for sure, but I think to tell it would have required more of the enviorment in the shot. The lighting is dull and the camera angle does not complement the story. Your expression is dead pan here. Makeup is great (perfect lips!) I feel as though your hands should be in the shot and looking away only pulls the viewer's eyes away from the shot after they look at that body. Try to find other shots in this series: you might have something great on someone's hard drive.
