September 05, 2006 6:32pm I also like this one and maybe the make-up would have gone long way here. but I do like the angle, maybe like the other guy said.if you would have chahnged the perspective a little to make her shoulders narrower.
August 29, 2006 6:54am well let me tell you what I see wrong with it first... It is not flattering because her shoulders look too big and this angle makes her look disproportional...other than that I like the framing, exposure, and capture of the beautiful smile... I'm not trying to offend, just a crit... :)
August 28, 2006 2:51pm Well for critique I don't see anything wrong with it...maybe the model needs a Mua. but the portrait and the model are both beautiful!
