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Photographer

Ponte Ryuurui

Posts: 18

Tokyo, Tokyo, Japan

Sci fi manipulation that I have created earlier this year, its a speed art video (full workflow was 40 hours). Enjoy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NSLD1dX … 5EeGxCSKNx

link to high res image if anyone would like to see:
https://ponte-ryuurui-photography.smugm … -65QsdHV/A

Dec 28 16 08:24 am Link

Digital Artist

Joe Diamond

Posts: 415

Bucharest, Bucharest, Romania

You are pretty creative but my suggestion is to work on make it believable, the wings have no depth and a little bit fake

Jan 03 17 11:42 am Link

Photographer

Jerry Nemeth

Posts: 33355

Dearborn, Michigan, US

Joe Diamond wrote:
You are pretty creative but my suggestion is to work on make it believable, the wings have no depth and a little bit fake

I agree.

Jan 03 17 12:41 pm Link

Photographer

Mary Durante Youtt

Posts: 520

Barnegat, New Jersey, US

Coming from a person who barely manages anything in mask and layers.  Whoa....  no criticism here.   
I worked in advertising and was amazed at the art of photo compositions - way before computers.

Jan 03 17 01:11 pm Link

Photographer

Chuckarelei

Posts: 11271

Seattle, Washington, US

Joe Diamond wrote:
You are pretty creative but my suggestion is to work on make it believable, the wings have no depth and a little bit fake

I would have to agree with Joe. Though this is a not critique section here, post it in critique section op and i'll give my feedback.

Nonetheless op, it's still a very good piece of work. I could not have done it myself.

Jan 03 17 02:04 pm Link

Photographer

nathanx

Posts: 10

Austin, Texas, US

You have serious integration issues.
Nothing really feels Physically plausible.
It's flat/2D, Digitally Muddy. Sorry you spent so much time on this.

Ponte Ryuurui wrote:
Sci fi manipulation that I have created earlier this year, its a speed art video (full workflow was 40 hours). Enjoy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NSLD1dX … 5EeGxCSKNx

link to high res image if anyone would like to see:
https://ponte-ryuurui-photography.smugm … -65QsdHV/A

Jan 03 17 09:58 pm Link

Photographer

Ponte Ryuurui

Posts: 18

Tokyo, Tokyo, Japan

Joe Diamond wrote:
You are pretty creative but my suggestion is to work on make it believable, the wings have no depth and a little bit fake

Cheers man, I am guessing you mean shadows tweaks right?

Jan 04 17 10:03 am Link

Digital Artist

Joe Diamond

Posts: 415

Bucharest, Bucharest, Romania

Not only shadows but lights, transitions, blending everything

Jan 04 17 10:16 am Link

Photographer

BornArts

Posts: 306

Fresno, California, US

Not bad but needs some work.  I agree with Joe; shadows, highlights, color matching, etc.  But, what is killing the comp for me is perspective.  You need a more realistic line of horizon and from that you need to use the vanishing point created by the tire tracks in the dirt. Line those things up and then re-adjust your ground shadows and that will help sell her surrounding environment.

Jan 08 17 12:31 pm Link

Photographer

365 Digitals Exposed

Posts: 807

Perris, California, US

nathanx wrote:
You have serious integration issues.
Nothing really feels Physically plausible.
It's flat/2D, Digitally Muddy. Sorry you spent so much time on this.


You should put few of your pictures in the critis forums, you you also can learn where are you standing  at.

Jan 08 17 02:11 pm Link

Photographer

365 Digitals Exposed

Posts: 807

Perris, California, US

Ponte Ryuurui wrote:
Sci fi manipulation that I have created earlier this year, its a speed art video (full workflow was 40 hours). Enjoy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NSLD1dX … 5EeGxCSKNx

link to high res image if anyone would like to see:
https://ponte-ryuurui-photography.smugm … -65QsdHV/A

Amazing work.  Haters exist all over, don't worry

Jan 08 17 02:12 pm Link

Photographer

365 Digitals Exposed

Posts: 807

Perris, California, US

double post

Jan 08 17 02:50 pm Link

Photographer

Ponte Ryuurui

Posts: 18

Tokyo, Tokyo, Japan

365 Digitals Exposed wrote:

Amazing work.  Haters exist all over, don't worry

appreciated thanks, well every criticism is worth looking at, art in general is an endless learning

Jan 12 17 07:24 am Link