Forums > Digital Art and Retouching > Which edit looks better and more cinematic?

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Santiago Alvarez

Posts: 91

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

I am honestly so torn with this one, i cannot differentiate the better one, so #1- top or #2- bottom?
https://i.imgur.com/Cte3dyj.jpg

Sep 28 16 12:28 am Link

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Patreshas Editing

Posts: 3021

Frankston, Victoria, Australia

Santiago Alvarez wrote:
I am honestly so torn with this one, i cannot differentiate the better one, so #1- top or #2- bottom?
https://i.imgur.com/Cte3dyj.jpg

Hey There,

I really like the top one, it has a very eerie feeling which is what the image looks like it is trying to achieve.
Well done love it.

- P

Sep 28 16 03:45 pm Link

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Jerry Nemeth

Posts: 33355

Dearborn, Michigan, US

I prefer the top image.

Sep 28 16 04:22 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Salo

Posts: 11737

Olney, Maryland, US

I like the top image as the red eyes contrast with the more believable surroundings.

Sep 28 16 06:18 pm Link

Retoucher

Steven Burnette Retouch

Posts: 338

Mount Vernon, New York, US

Out of the two, the top is the one. Reason being is the bottom one lacks enough contrast between foreground and background. Everything in the second image becomes a bit muddy and blends together and seems to be trying too hard. The top (image #1) reads as more visually impactful.

Sep 28 16 08:07 pm Link

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TMA Photo and Training

Posts: 1009

Lancaster, Pennsylvania, US

I know this is an edit...but I wonder if threads like this... that ask for member image judgements... dont better belong  in the critique forum? 

If the OP had asked for specific retouching techniques, retouching questions, or methods to produce such changes in  images etc... then it seems like yes...this post would belong here. 

The Image Critique or Image Comment Forum is here:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/forums/thread/8

Sep 29 16 01:41 pm Link

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A-M-P

Posts: 18465

Orlando, Florida, US

The bottom one. I don't like the green one at all.

Sep 30 16 06:29 am Link

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KungPaoChic

Posts: 4221

West Palm Beach, Florida, US

A-M-P wrote:
The bottom one. I don't like the green one at all.

Me too!

For me the green background takes away from the mood of the image

Sep 30 16 07:21 am Link

Retoucher

GregWatson

Posts: 754

Mount Airy, North Carolina, US

I like the top better.  I'd put more blue and cyan in the shadows and mid tones but that's just my taste..

Sep 30 16 11:48 am Link

Photographer

Santiago Alvarez

Posts: 91

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

I appreciate the feedback guys. I finally went with the bottom one just because of the reasons stated above.

Sep 30 16 07:25 pm Link

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Giacomo Cirrincioni

Posts: 22234

Stamford, Connecticut, US

Neither is inherently cinematic.  Regarding color choice, it depends on the narrative.  I highly recommend the book, "If it's Purple, Someone's Gonna Die: The Power of Color in Visual Storytelling"

https://www.amazon.com/Its-Purple-Someo … 0240806883

There are a lot of good books on color theory, but this one (along with a few others) is a staple for art directors and colorists.  Color palette is something that should be thought through before you ever pick up your camera, it begins in the storyboarding phase (if, indeed, you are working on cinematic imagery - not all still work needs to be, nor warrants being treated as, cinematic).

This is also worth a read:

https://www.amazon.com/Color-Correction … CN6TVA5SWP

BTW, this image:

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160707/20/577f22128aaf9_m.jpg

Is, to my eye, the most cinematic shot in your portfolio.  Nice job!

Oct 02 16 07:12 pm Link

Retoucher

HammadsWorks

Posts: 79

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

Bottom. Not only is it setting a mood, the colours work. Unless you change the greens to a more teal and saturated colour.

Green looks less intense..

Though I feel the bottom is still too "bright" (looks like you want more dark cold saturated looks, not orangy and warm ones). But it's cinematic in my opinion.

Oct 05 16 10:59 am Link

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Toto Photo

Posts: 3757

Belmont, California, US

Bottom is more cinematic.

Oct 05 16 04:00 pm Link

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Santiago Alvarez

Posts: 91

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

HammadsWorks wrote:
Bottom. Not only is it setting a mood, the colours work. Unless you change the greens to a more teal and saturated colour.

Green looks less intense..

Though I feel the bottom is still too "bright" (looks like you want more dark cold saturated looks, not orangy and warm ones). But it's cinematic in my opinion.

I wanted the overall image to have soft colors and an overall warm feeling to it so it could contrast with the fiery eyes. If I made the image too dark, I would've lost the "warmness" of the image.

Oct 08 16 10:11 am Link

Photographer

Exclusive Photo

Posts: 310

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

I like the top image. The colors are more pleasing and while the word natural doesn't go with the photo theme, the blue/green tinge more natural look actually helps the photo be more appealing.

Oct 08 16 10:23 am Link

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RETOUCHLAB

Posts: 53

Los Angeles, California, US

I prefer 2nd one, i love warm colors

Oct 25 16 01:56 pm Link

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Lacroix-Retouch

Posts: 45

Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland

Second is better. The first one is a typical filter everyone uses. It's a bit played out.

Oct 26 16 04:26 pm Link

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Thach of FotoHouse

Posts: 31

Seattle, Washington, US

I like the feel of the bottom one, but it's really what mood you are trying to send or what you want to emphasize on.

Nov 05 16 07:48 pm Link