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Photographer

flyboy70

Posts: 4

Fürstenfeld, Steiermark, Austria

hi to all retouchers,
I'd love to hear what I could have done better in this image - here's the tech stuff smile
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39306707

D700 - 24/70 2.8G
1 Strobe in 60cm octabox
in LR5 - contrast, and other basics adjusted.

i've no experience in PS, but would have thought that sunrays etc may have improved it a lot.

thanks for any feedback.

Sep 21 15 05:30 am Link

Retoucher

Removed_Account_532016

Posts: 149

Sitrah, Sitrah, Bahrain

I'm not a pro but I like it smile You used the rule of thirds with the water coming down in the center of the image which is nice. Personally I would have made kind of a warm colour grading but that is just my personal taste. Nice image. Keep it up.

Sep 21 15 05:52 am Link

Photographer

flyboy70

Posts: 4

Fürstenfeld, Steiermark, Austria

vielen dank ! lg aus Österreich

Sep 21 15 06:06 am Link

Photographer

Toto Photo

Posts: 3757

Belmont, California, US

Beautiful photo.
You'll probably get more critiques in the Critique Forum

If it were my photo, I'd probably take the blue out of the dress but I'm guessing I'd put it back in after looking at it that way.

Sep 23 15 12:27 pm Link