Hey everyone! Im new to MM and just had my very first shoot last week! I have a couple of the photos up already, so how did I do? Any advice/comments are appreciated!
  -Christine

My two cents?  Add more headshots; you have a gorgeous face, but in most of your shots it's too hard to see.  And get some photographs that keep you as the main focus of the portrait - most of your current ones are using automobiles as the star of the show.  And get better lighting to show off your face/body rather than (again) the automobiles.  Hope that helps and good luck!