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Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

I know i am new and still just a GWC, but I would still love some constructive crits on my images. If you have time let me know what i can do to make it better.

Jun 04 06 09:46 am Link

Photographer

J Merrill Images

Posts: 1412

Harvey, Illinois, US

You are off to a good start. What I notice in particular is that you have imagination and, in my opinion, that is the most important quality that a photog can have.

Jun 04 06 09:52 am Link

Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

I would swop it for skill anytime. But I guesse that is something that comes with time. Thanks

Jun 04 06 09:55 am Link

Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

J Looked at your port, would love to see some more work from you.

Jun 04 06 10:10 am Link

Model

Ayira Araceli

Posts: 210

Virginia Beach, Virginia, US

I love your work...very artisitc and I think you've got skill. You worked well with the lighting, shadows etc....I look forward to seeing more smile
Good Luck!

Jun 04 06 10:20 am Link

Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

Thanks for the compliment. Anything you see that can be done better. I would love to hear.

Jun 04 06 10:22 am Link

Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

Anybody else. ????

Jun 04 06 10:33 am Link

Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

Nobody???????

Jun 04 06 10:57 am Link

Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

Lets see. Is there anybody else out there??

Jun 04 06 12:35 pm Link

Photographer

Tony Lawrence

Posts: 21526

Chicago, Illinois, US

I really like your figure abstracts.  The glamour model stuff is sorta average.
Not bad but average.

Jun 04 06 12:41 pm Link

Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

And there in lies the problem every time I try a Glam model shoot, I run into so many tech problems that I end up fiddeling instead of shooting. It sucks.

Jun 04 06 12:44 pm Link

Photographer

Golden Light

Posts: 951

Miami, Florida, US

Have youn tried taking 200 pix in an hour??  Great models and lots of pix. One of the things  BT does.  4-5 pix out of 200 are bound to be way good.  I am just a GWC but I look a lot.

Jun 04 06 12:47 pm Link

Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

I try to, but then the light is to harsh, then the shadows are to harsh, I just cant get into a flow. My home studio is Basic(Thats beeing complimentary to it) And I am just not getting it balanced. Time......., but who has that.

Jun 04 06 12:50 pm Link

Photographer

Tony Lawrence

Posts: 21526

Chicago, Illinois, US

Gerrit du Toit wrote:
And there in lies the problem every time I try a Glam model shoot, I run into so many tech problems that I end up fiddeling instead of shooting. It sucks.

Dude you are living in one of the best looking areas in the world.  GET OUTSIDE!
Are you using digital cameras or film?  If digital then look at your histogram for
proper exposure.  If film without a good metter use the f/16 rule.  Bring the
same creative view you are using to shooting models.

Jun 04 06 12:51 pm Link

Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

I know I should go shoot outside. But until I get this damn studio working I cant get my mind focused on anything else. I will try going more dramatic with the glam, That may help.

Jun 04 06 12:55 pm Link

Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

Also can you guys send a few models this way we seem to have a shortage here in cape town.

Jun 04 06 01:05 pm Link

Photographer

Gerrit du Toit

Posts: 732

Pretoria, Gauteng, South Africa

Anybody up to some crit work. I can take it promise

Jun 04 06 03:07 pm Link