March 08, 2010 6:26pm wow i love this, cool idea for a shoot, gives me the feeling of mannequins in a store coming alive at night, very cool x Im in brisbane too and have seen your casting call, if you still need someone for tomorrow morning just let me know I should be able to help out, i work full time however job is quite flexible. Cheers
February 23, 2010 1:01pm I love this shot!! Great concept and pulled off with such glam and fun... great poses and lighting...LOVE IT! You're a very talented photog ... good eye!:)
January 25, 2010 4:23pm I'll agree with the poster that stated needed some fill light to "open the eyes" and some light to show the clothes if it's fashion you are doing. Concept is great and posing is nice.
June 07, 2009 12:07am Some (hopefully) helpful comments:
(1) Put the taller girls at the back. The petite girl in the middle rear should be in the front row.
(2) A small amount of fill flash would have filled in some of the shadows and avoided the "panda eyes" all of the models have.
(3) The fill flash could also help to reduce contrast, so that you can avoid blown out highlights such as on the girls on the extreme left and right of the group.
(4) I don't know what your camera is like, but I wouldn't trust the autofocus, especially in low light conditions. On mine (Canon EOS350d) it is neither accurate nor consistent, so I almost always focus manually.
As for the concept though, that's fantastic. It's a great idea and the girls are well-posed. Just make sure the technical side doesn't gets some attention too. :)