My apologies to everyone who has posted. Done and gone.

These two are so much alike that they are not both necessary.


The model's face is a bit more visible here but I'm not a fan of hands up in the air.


The model's face is a bit more visible here but I really don't like the hands in the air.


Is it my aging eyesight or are all of the eyes a bit soft.

This is a confusing image. As an avatar, it almost looks like the model has weird legs. In the full size version, the boards are still confusing especially since there is nothing is the lower half of the picture. And the angle of her face is disconcerting.

The in-focus fingers on the left side of the frame are distracting.  I would either crop them out or blur them.


This image feels too similar and is not as good as the images where the same model is in the same place in a different dress.  I think you could lose it from your portfolio.


I think some of your styles need more examples: a few more live theater shots, a few of the high concept stuff (woman in the freezer, the edited woman peering in on herself through the window). 

This is my favorite image in your portfolio (linked b/c 18+))
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/48118644#

You are brave to ask for a critique of your portfolio!

But you are also  defensive about some of the remarks that were offered. Mark Solo and LA Star both offered critiques and both seem to have met with your rebuke.  I don't think that encourages people to offer honest critique.

In my opinion your portfolio is inconsistent in style and technical skills. I would encourage you to cull any that you don't consider to be your best, show only your strongest. As they say in the Great British Baking Show, just put up your show stoppers!