Hey guys :-) Looking for paid work in Miami fort lauderdale area
Easy going and reliable
9 years experience as an print model newer in this area

Are you looking to make money right away or looking for a few "trade for" shoots first?  You definitely have the looks for this. I'm not sure what I would de differently but any changes I would make shooting  with a model to sharpen things up would be subliminal positioning that might add even more pizazz . I think I agree with one person who hinted that on the one with the bridal white outfit and a flower in the hair it might be better that the entire outfit on this "waist and up" shot be in full focus ---  Bob in the Cape.