Forums > Critique > I would love some feedback on my profile.

Photographer

Sipes

Posts: 3

Baltimore, Maryland, US

I LOVE critical feedback but do also mention things that you like, thanks!

Warm regards,
Eric

Mar 09 23 01:09 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Salo

Posts: 11726

Olney, Maryland, US

By and large, your first 16 images leave me cold.

+18 This reminds me of a wadded up Kleenex:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47846526

Lighting seems to be random: +18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47846505
I would remove the bright knees and the bit of a foot, leaving only the line of the face/neck/shoulder.

+18 The bright shoulder and the in-my-face fingers do nothing for me.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47846506

How is the depiction of this dancer enhanced by the dark exposure?
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/230309/12/640a3c970526e_m.jpg

A picture of a mask. Really?
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/230309/13/640a4ea83218d_m.jpg

Mar 10 23 05:35 am Link

Photographer

Sipes

Posts: 3

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Thank you so much for your reflection, I really appreciate you taking the time.

Mar 10 23 08:54 am Link