Jessica Darwinian wrote:
Would love comments and (private) critiques on my portfolio - especially the nudes.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/4658929/viewall

Thanks in advance!

Hey Jessica,

For what it's worth, I focus on dance photography here in Chicago.  You had a tough assignment there photographing the dancers in such low-light conditions.  That may be your style, and if so, then you need to keep honing it.  In terms of photographing the groups, everyone in the image has to work to make the image worthwhile, and some of the shots had people blocking out each other and it didn't really make sense to me why they were in the shot.

Some of your shots are quite nice, tho.  If you're serious about learning more about dance photography, join our Pas de Deux Photo Facebook group.   We have more than 1,000 dance photographers on there, ranging from beginning photographers or beginning dance photographers, to former dancers and elite dance photographers.  We have a nice community on there.  Hope to see you join us.

Ron