Hey, so i recently uploaded some photos from a shoot i did recently, and keen to hear any feedback, positive or critical.

First time ive done shirtless so tried something new to try progress in the industry a bit. Feel free to consider these for lists too!

thank you

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47172302

The difference between a great portrait and a good portrait is the little things

1.    The human eye is attracted to bright areas, the background above your head is distracting, and so my eyes are drawn there.
2.    Your pose is more like a mug shot than a portrait, your body is stiff and simply facing the camera, add dynamics and place your body on an angle to camera.
3.    Details, shirt collar is stretched out around your neck, see how it flops outward at the top.
4.    Lint or something, right side of models head, near fly away hair

It is a good photo as I can clearly see what you look like, I wish you well.