Hi,
Thanks for coming by. I need some guidance on how to move forward! Please critique me!

You've got a good look that's matured in your later shots, but the backgrounds are way too busy, and distract from you too much. Even if you've just got snapshots, try to tighten them up and put the focus on your face and body. Also, your range of looks isn't really shown here, try to evoke more feeling in your shots.

I'm looking for critique trades also, so if you want to get into more specific detail, check my thread on the main Critique page.