Hi there, hope you can critique me here a bit!
My monitor isnt calibrated, so I tried the best with colors, but I probably missed something just for that
Also Imgur gave some redish tone to the skin for some reason, the original is less saturated.

If we just talk about the retouching work accept color there are some minor issues there in the image.
1. forehead some horizontal lines that must be removed.
2.left side of the shoulder left with some area untouched
3. The color is bit dull, I think (in terms of saturation )

Rest is perfect.