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Photographer

Dead Eye Photo

Posts: 15

Goodyear, Arizona, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/0 … a62969.jpg

It's all the ink.  The image itself is great.  Just want to take an eraser to her.  Just not an tattoo fan.

Jun 07 21 03:32 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Dead Eye Photo wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/0 … a62969.jpg

It's all the ink.  The image itself is great.  Just want to take an eraser to her.  Just not an tattoo fan.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46980986
Just my least fav.

Jun 09 21 05:41 am Link

Photographer

ottawa_on_fire

Posts: 4

Eškašem, Badakhshan, Afghanistan

Hey man, your work is great. My least fav is linked below. The arm holding the bamboo is stiff, the model's intention is unclear and so the story is muddled. The BW edit does not create enough separation of the model from the background, which becomes a distraction. Would love to hear from you!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34747751

Aug 11 21 09:54 am Link

Photographer

Copper Bantam

Posts: 7

Hiram, Georgia, US

Good morning. I just spent a minute in your port. Man you have some beautiful work in there! I had to force myself to find the least desirable pic for this thread and I settled upon this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42104586

She is gorgeous, I know this because I looked a few rows down and saw the pic of her standing in that same spot. I would have liked to have seen her in the crouched pose just as you shot her but with her looking into the lens. The hair could be there as it is or pushed to the side. Again, it was hard for me to pick a "least favorite" or "worst shot" because you have beautiful work.

Sep 16 21 06:54 am Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

ottawa_on_fire wrote:
Hey man, your work is great. My least fav is linked below. The arm holding the bamboo is stiff, the model's intention is unclear and so the story is muddled. The BW edit does not create enough separation of the model from the background, which becomes a distraction. Would love to hear from you!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34747751

Thanks for the info!

Here was my least fav..
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47077070
Center heavy... COOL LOCATION THOUGH!! WOW

Sep 18 21 04:57 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Copper Bantam wrote:
Good morning. I just spent a minute in your port. Man you have some beautiful work in there! I had to force myself to find the least desirable pic for this thread and I settled upon this one ttps://whww.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42104586

She is gorgeous, I know this because I looked a few rows down and saw the pic of her standing in that same spot. I would have liked to have seen her in the crouched pose just as you shot her but with her looking into the lens. The hair could be there as it is or pushed to the side. Again, it was hard for me to pick a "least favorite" or "worst shot" because you have beautiful work.

Thank you!!

Just my least fav.. I think it is the post work and it feels a bit stiff or unnatural.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/210913/07/613f61fb66622_m.jpg

Sep 18 21 05:01 pm Link

Photographer

Copper Bantam

Posts: 7

Hiram, Georgia, US

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Thank you!!

Just my least fav.. I think it is the post work and it feels a bit stiff or unnatural.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/210913/07/613f61fb66622_m.jpg

Thank you Sir. I may go back and re-edit this one or take it down all together. I did this one a few years ago.

Sep 19 21 05:14 am Link

Photographer

sospix

Posts: 23775

Orlando, Florida, US

I hate this one  .  .  .

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/210210/14/6024614d5a8d2_m.jpg

.  .  .  OKAY, Okay, ok  .  .  .  I don't hate it  .  .  .  I jest hate that I haven't had the chance to shot with the model who's in it  .  .  .  does that still count  .  .  .  wink

SOS

Sep 22 21 02:09 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

sospix wrote:
I hate this one  .  .  .

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/210210/14/6024614d5a8d2_m.jpg

.  .  .  OKAY, Okay, ok  .  .  .  I don't hate it  .  .  .  I jest hate that I haven't had the chance to shot with the model who's in it  .  .  .  does that still count  .  .  .  wink

SOS

LMAO!!!!! That works for sure!

Least fav..
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110108/05/4d28693e6e68c_m.jpg

Oct 25 21 11:55 am Link

Photographer

Krpphoto

Posts: 197

Cape Coral, Florida, US

I do really like the sepia  toned  one of the gal with the fish netting over her. Looks a bit sassy . I don't mind that the next is not showing.

Feb 04 22 04:56 pm Link

Photographer

Krpphoto

Posts: 197

Cape Coral, Florida, US

Not sure my comment listed. I love the sepia toned image with the gal covered with fish netting. The expression is attention drawing and she has her body facing away but eyes turned toward the viewer which leads you to wonder what drew her attention (you did). I don't mind the neck not showing. I actually also like the image of the gal sitting in an uncomfortable wooden chair (looks like a grade  school chair) shot low like she was a teacher or business woman with her leg spread about to seduce somebody . Her braw clearly visible.
Saw another photo that was so lit she was almost, in here nudity, washed out and the head tilt and facial look simply looked a bit silly. You have the makings of a very good photographer hands down.

Feb 04 22 05:17 pm Link

Photographer

Jessica Darwinian

Posts: 10

Miami, Florida, US

Would love positive comments on my photos (especially the nudes) here: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/4658929/viewall

but your critiques on this thread so I could get better.

-thanks,
Craig

Feb 07 22 06:16 pm Link

Photographer

Thatchers Fine Art

Posts: 1265

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Sorry all.. letting this one die.

Feb 13 22 05:55 pm Link

Photographer

DougGoldmanPhotography

Posts: 6

Aberdeen, Maryland, US

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32545540
Being and NEWB and probably overly sensitive because of the many photogs that claim to offer "constructive criticisms", when they're actually using, at my expense, current opportunities to degrade and dismiss instead of fostering growth; I thought I would take extreme offense to this post on your behalf.  However, getting over myself, I examined the images people offered so as to evaluate what I noticed in creative difference.  I missed simple things in my assessments that I only noticed after reading they why's of why images were selected.  So, thank you for this opportunity and your contributions to my growth stemmed from your post and it's interactions.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32545540
To me, this image appeared to have the legs disproportionate from the top half of her body.  Like when U use a 35mm or less and the lens isn't held level, it results in a portion of the model being larger than the rest.  Please feel free to grab 1,2,3 of mine.  Thanks again.  Ur making me better and it's greatly appreciated.

Feb 21 22 08:37 am Link