https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/0 … a62969.jpg It's all the ink. The image itself is great. Just want to take an eraser to her. Just not an tattoo fan. Jun 07 21 03:32 pm Link Dead Eye Photo wrote: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46980986 Jun 09 21 05:41 am Link Hey man, your work is great. My least fav is linked below. The arm holding the bamboo is stiff, the model's intention is unclear and so the story is muddled. The BW edit does not create enough separation of the model from the background, which becomes a distraction. Would love to hear from you! https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34747751 Aug 11 21 09:54 am Link Good morning. I just spent a minute in your port. Man you have some beautiful work in there! I had to force myself to find the least desirable pic for this thread and I settled upon this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42104586 She is gorgeous, I know this because I looked a few rows down and saw the pic of her standing in that same spot. I would have liked to have seen her in the crouched pose just as you shot her but with her looking into the lens. The hair could be there as it is or pushed to the side. Again, it was hard for me to pick a "least favorite" or "worst shot" because you have beautiful work. Sep 16 21 06:54 am Link ottawa_on_fire wrote: Thanks for the info! Sep 18 21 04:57 pm Link Copper Bantam wrote: Thank you!! Sep 18 21 05:01 pm Link Sep 19 21 05:14 am Link I hate this one . . . . . . OKAY, Okay, ok . . . I don't hate it . . . I jest hate that I haven't had the chance to shot with the model who's in it . . . does that still count . . . SOS Sep 22 21 02:09 pm Link Oct 25 21 11:55 am Link I do really like the sepia toned one of the gal with the fish netting over her. Looks a bit sassy . I don't mind that the next is not showing. Feb 04 22 04:56 pm Link Not sure my comment listed. I love the sepia toned image with the gal covered with fish netting. The expression is attention drawing and she has her body facing away but eyes turned toward the viewer which leads you to wonder what drew her attention (you did). I don't mind the neck not showing. I actually also like the image of the gal sitting in an uncomfortable wooden chair (looks like a grade school chair) shot low like she was a teacher or business woman with her leg spread about to seduce somebody . Her braw clearly visible. Saw another photo that was so lit she was almost, in here nudity, washed out and the head tilt and facial look simply looked a bit silly. You have the makings of a very good photographer hands down. Feb 04 22 05:17 pm Link Would love positive comments on my photos (especially the nudes) here: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/4658929/viewall but your critiques on this thread so I could get better. -thanks, Craig Feb 07 22 06:16 pm Link Sorry all.. letting this one die. Feb 13 22 05:55 pm Link Being and NEWB and probably overly sensitive because of the many photogs that claim to offer "constructive criticisms", when they're actually using, at my expense, current opportunities to degrade and dismiss instead of fostering growth; I thought I would take extreme offense to this post on your behalf. However, getting over myself, I examined the images people offered so as to evaluate what I noticed in creative difference. I missed simple things in my assessments that I only noticed after reading they why's of why images were selected. So, thank you for this opportunity and your contributions to my growth stemmed from your post and it's interactions. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32545540 To me, this image appeared to have the legs disproportionate from the top half of her body. Like when U use a 35mm or less and the lens isn't held level, it results in a portion of the model being larger than the rest. Please feel free to grab 1,2,3 of mine. Thanks again. Ur making me better and it's greatly appreciated. Feb 21 22 08:37 am Link |