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Photographer

Sophia D

Posts: 9

Fresno, California, US

I'd love some feedback on my portfolio and suggestions for future shots.
Thank you in advanced <3

May 14 19 02:12 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Just going to pick my favorite photos

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/190514/02/5cda83e4ac1e7_m.jpg
Just adorable

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111231/02/4efee868b14c6_m.jpg
Strong eyes

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110530/14/4de4088c2c4b4_m.jpg
Loose what looks like a hair band on models right wrist, and this would also be a top pick for me

I wish you well

May 18 19 04:25 pm Link

Photographer

Sophia D

Posts: 9

Fresno, California, US

Thank you! <3

May 19 19 08:03 pm Link

Model

Robyn Leslie

Posts: 61

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

Updated with comment to my fave

May 22 19 06:25 am Link

Photographer

Krpphoto

Posts: 197

Cape Coral, Florida, US

Sophia D. - On the black and white and the sepia like shots - your staring to much directly into the cameras lens. This is , at least here , an image breaker. When your facing the lens look for an object near the lens - perhaps a spot on the wall a bit to the side of it, or, if shooting outdoors a specific spot on a tree. Pretend there is something you are trying to see better and look at it as if trying to get better detail of exactly what you are looking at.

May 25 19 02:13 pm Link