Hello folks (:

Final result:


After/Before:


Thank you!

I like it as a good, straightforward retouch.

but, I think you've gone too far with the contrast, it's loosing background separation,
eye color is unnaturally dark ect. The retouching part is good though.

She looks fresh, but deep shadows make heavier this image.
Also, be careful with the details in the shade, you can lose information.

Contrast looks high a bit but of course decision is yours

Well you need to improve the skin texture, details more. now its blur

I would bring back some High Frequency into the flesh and tone down the contrast just a tad, the clean up and retouching so far is really good. The white point on the skin is just a bit too hot for my taste and I'm losing a lot of that detail. I think I read a comment about some noise/emboss that's not a bad option, blur slightly and it'll bring back a nice little even texture across the board. Keep rockin it!!!