Buck Remington wrote:

Well, we certainly work in different genres!  I picked this one:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34155852

because the right knee is sorta in my face.  Also, not good contrast between the model and the background.

But just one worthless opinion.

Nor-Cal Photography wrote:

This one:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39583462 (18+)

The lighting is just... not... good.

It's fairly flat on the model - except where there's a blown highlight.  These lighting *might* have worked in B&W if you were shooting something like Efke KB25 or Agfapan 100 and exposing & developing for lower contrast - might even have been compelling.  But here it's just blah.

I Ference Photography wrote:

This one:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39583462 (18+)

The lighting is just... not... good.

It's fairly flat on the model - except where there's a blown highlight.  These lighting *might* have worked in B&W if you were shooting something like Efke KB25 or Agfapan 100 and exposing & developing for lower contrast - might even have been compelling.  But here it's just blah.

Um, was skipped here!  >

Amy DeBellis wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39985662

Doesn't stand out and the shirt design is distracting

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42165223

You look totally disinterested, and the face color is more yellowish than the rest of the body. A definite no-go in my opinion

True Beauty Boudoir wrote:

Kelly Kooper wrote:

Wow, tough assignment to find your worst.  OK, I'll pick this one:



because it is somewhat out of focus, too much wasted space, and not terribly interesting.

But just one worthless opinion.

Shadow Dancer wrote:

Really embarrassing cut out. Very obvious from just the thumbnail how bad the hair is. Her arm didn't fair much better. The spot light effect on her face is also too much; the rest of her body should match closer than it does.

Sendu wrote:



Really embarrassing cut out. Very obvious from just the thumbnail how bad the hair is. Her arm didn't fair much better. The spot light effect on her face is also too much; the rest of her body should match closer than it does.

Thanks, deleted!!!

Sendu wrote:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33447992

Composition - straight on in front of a brick wall? Very static and very old cliche.

The fake "light leaks" on the left middle and right lower corner look as fake as they are. A sepia toned image (if that is the intended look?) would not have color shifts introduced in the sepia process, would it? I didn't think so. It looks like a multi colored layer of foggy stuff laid over the image "just because".

Distracting bright spots throughout the image. The worst is just above the model's left armpit, completely blown out. It draws the attention away, as does the bright and perfectly level stool, the specular in the random light leaning randomly in the corner for no apparent reason or benefit,  all the little bright spots on the floor, along the right side of the image in the random clutter-stuff on the edge and the large, lighter spot in the vignetted area in the upper right.

The rest of your work is lovely, this drags your port down a bit. Cheers!

J Jessica wrote:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33811545 81+ It doesn't flow with the rest of your port

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/38447843
It looks somewhat uncomfortable.

Mythos Photo wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44185889

Your port is really solid so it was tough, but this one just seems lesser than the rest. Mainly more of a headshot (not necessarily snapshot)

Cheers!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35177693
It's just a little bit too vague.

Liv Tellier wrote:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/35177693
It's just a little bit too vague.

Hey, I played the game !

Unchaste wrote:
Hey, I played the game !

1. The lens is too wide for the shot, so the distortion is awful, probably the most snapshot-like characteristic.
2. The on-camera flash is terrible, hard, flat lighting.  The photo in under exposed. Minimal catch lights.
3. The bright lamp in the background draws the eye due to size and brightness.
4. Colors are too mute.
5. It looks like a hotel room.  My latest set are my only shots taken in a hotel room.  It should be difficult to tell.

On the positive side:
1. Sharpness and DOF are good.
2. Composition is good with the exceptions noted, but generally, more interest is needed.