my work (credit: Dallas J. Logan)

http://hoodoo91.deviantart.com/art/p-a- … 2211&qo=15

I need of councils. Thank u! Sorry for my bad english

her face is a bit too bright for my taste and her hand could use some work. I also see some yellow tones possibly caused by the way you burn especially around her "screen right" shoulder.
I'm also not too fond of that highlight on her right arm too.

If it was me, I would try to find a way to make her neck less pale and would remove some more dark spots all over too

not bad but seems like you spend most of the time on her face

oh, thank you so much
you're right

Nice work, i believe you could work more in the skin and gave her a more natural tone, looks good, but looks like a ghost

oh yeah xD
Thank you so much for the comment!