looks as if you use a blur technique to smooth out the skin....
and while most don't like the blurred skin look...some do...so at the moment that would be your target clientele...

the skin on the models look blotchy and uneven...
maybe try cloning and/or using the healing brush first...


I personally don't like the blurred skin look...
I would recommend you to practice more and learn how to dodge and burn .....yes its more time consuming,,,but its worth it to learn...

or if you must blur..use it in moderation..

There are quite a few things that could be better, but main problem is blurred and blotchy skin.

You have to look at the original and retouched and think "which one looks better", do you really think the retouched ones look better?
They look like clouds with eyes, Start over without blur, or at least a lot less, with blur, if the tones aren't corrected, it also looks like very patchy makeup.
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