Hi Guys, Im always up for a good Critique. A person can never have too much good advice, So with that being said i would like for you to view my port and give some serious Critiques. Also If you want to get a better idea of how the image progressed you can visit my website www.ionicimages.com there you will be able to see before & after images. I want to be the best at my craft, so I am willing hear from everyone. -Thanks in Advance Jun 27 10 04:20 am Link I think you need to work on the following.....lighting, purpose, retouching, focus, perspective. First, we'll talk about the above image. There are a few golden rules for digital manipulation. One of them is to NEVER use the "transform" tool to distort an entire image of a person. It messes up...well everything. The entire shape of the person is unnatural, and it's completely obvious why. it looks like you tried to make her more narrow by simply squishing the image. Next is lighting. This picture makes no sense at all. The lighting on the girl is entirely different than the background. You need to find a way to fake the lighting more effectively, or try an entirely different background. Also....what is it's purpose? Maybe this is nit-picking....but the "Story" of this image confuses me. Is she waiting for something? She has luggage...and she's sitting on her luggage....waiting......but.....why is she sitting parallel to a perfectly good sitting bench? Why is she sitting on her luggage, literally while she's inches away from a bench and facing right at it? The concept doesn't make any sense to me. it's just a cut and paste image. Jun 27 10 05:41 am Link This Is why I love Critiques!!! Ok Any Tips On What I Should Do Different...I Agree With you Totally On The Park Scene...I was Thinking Maybe I Should have used The Bench. Jun 27 10 09:56 am Link Trancedelic Retouching wrote: Your actual compositions of the pics are very good but there are the issues Trancedelic has said. Jun 28 10 12:31 am Link Once again thanks for the advice!!! Jun 28 10 07:51 am Link |