Hey just put new works up, please critique!

http://www.nw-retouching.com/prtfolio_g … meset.html

It is the 2nd image down with the candy on the eyes

The one beneath is also new

Thanks!

hey
your work is really nice
the first one of the cndy eyes, from what I can see looks good.
once thing though.
the top part of the hair around the edges and the right lump of hair, i dont like how you dodged around the hair but didnt remove it completely, it looks undone sorry

the second one, is simple, but it works for that image, so i liek how you emphasized the colours and sharpeded it up

nice work

I feel like you could take the hair further as far as the edges go. Right now it still looks too messy especially on the top and right-hand round-hair-thing. If you removed a little more frizziness I feel that it would look intentionally fuzzy as opposed to un-retouched.

Great stuff!