Model

C-Lynn

Posts: 409

Mesa, Arizona, US

I am a model on hiatus, and decided to try some retouching of my own... I have permission to use these photos.. so what do you think?
Do I have potential to keep editing and create an photoshop wizard account?
I have bigger versions too of course.

https://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs087.snc4/35724_1501198488316_1184810712_31452083_5340352_n.jpg
Mayhem #529684 (Photographer)

https://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs048.ash2/35744_1501945346987_1184810712_31453959_4796417_n.jpg
Mayhem #1507684 (Model)

this is the first image i have had trouble putting to a background, i even put the grass over her skin and it still looks cropped, any suggestions?

Jun 20 10 05:28 pm Link

Model

carmino

Posts: 344

Squamish, British Columbia, Canada

nice start.. but i don't believe that the model is sitting on the grass at all.. looks very cropped

Jun 20 10 05:30 pm Link

Model

C-Lynn

Posts: 409

Mesa, Arizona, US

carmino wrote:
nice start.. but i don't believe that the model is sitting on the grass at all.. looks very cropped

yea i just thought of a few things to improve it. smile

Jun 20 10 05:39 pm Link

Photographer

coraxphoto

Posts: 634

Nashville, Tennessee, US

carmino wrote:
nice start.. but i don't believe that the model is sitting on the grass at all.. looks very cropped

A) There aren't any shadows that would naturally be there

B) She is not the same size as the spot of ground (in relation to).  Looks like she is a giant

Jun 20 10 11:40 pm Link

Retoucher

IdontKnowIForgot

Posts: 3829

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom

C-Lynn wrote:
I am a model on hiatus, and decided to try some retouching of my own... I have permission to use these photos.. so what do you think?
Do I have potential to keep editing and create an photoshop wizard account?
I have bigger versions too of course.

https://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs087.snc4/35724_1501198488316_1184810712_31452083_5340352_n.jpg
Mayhem #529684 (Photographer)

https://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs048.ash2/35744_1501945346987_1184810712_31453959_4796417_n.jpg
Mayhem #1507684 (Model)

this is the first image i have had trouble putting to a background, i even put the grass over her skin and it still looks cropped, any suggestions?

nice start

i'll give you a beginners opinion though
if you wanted to contrast these images as much as you have, I think it is important you should also balance out the tones aswell, instead of leaving them as yellow or red.
as for the background change, for the first time, well done, nice idea trying to overlap the foot with the grass, but it's hard to get right, you got to just keep practasing.

as for having potential for carrying on and furthering your skills
its your choice entirely
whether you enjoy using ps, learning new techniques, spending hours on it for a result. its not necciserily hard to do, but requires alot of time and effort if you want to succeed, in my opinion anyways smile

just my thought, as a newb myself


Allanah

Jun 21 10 10:05 am Link