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Body Painter

Bodies of Paint

Posts: 962

Garden City South, New York, US

I am not looking to change the nature of this image, just make it more marketable in the fashion world,

https://api.ning.com:80/files/XP3gsU7ZqZnBoHrOvuYeSrAGhWeM52S4jFuZ-DIC*EJjlvJPQXLqv6xFYnoKUUC6Hv1oB-shBhBu8Gjeo0oEGzgFs5Ls2dO-/Joleefashion1aMM.jpg?width=450&height=600

I know the skin needs to be cleaned up, and I've already brightened the eyes and added highlights to the hair.

Jun 14 10 02:35 pm Link

Photographer

Pelle Piano

Posts: 2312

Stockholm, Stockholm, Sweden

I would adjust skin on face, background and hair.

If you want others to make samples or retouch , post in this forum ... https://www.modelmayhem.com/t.php?forum_id=76

Jun 14 10 02:42 pm Link

Body Painter

Bodies of Paint

Posts: 962

Garden City South, New York, US

pellepiano wrote:
I would adjust skin on face, background and hair.

If you want others to make samples or retouch , post in this forum ... https://www.modelmayhem.com/t.php?forum_id=76

I was just curious about what a wizard thought, but I will give that forum a try. 

Thanks.

Jun 14 10 02:45 pm Link

Retoucher

Natalia_Taffarel

Posts: 7665

Buenos Aires, Buenos Aires, Argentina

Post in the "critique" forum... I can't really say anything here

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Jun 14 10 02:54 pm Link

Photographer

Beyond the Physical

Posts: 912

HOLMDEL, New Jersey, US

get rid of the dark background

Jun 14 10 02:58 pm Link

Body Painter

Bodies of Paint

Posts: 962

Garden City South, New York, US

Natalia_Taffarel wrote:
Post in the "critique" forum... I can't really say anything here

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I am new to DAR, do you mean DAR critiques or General Feedback?

Jun 14 10 03:09 pm Link

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